You've got guts...
Although it has EXTREMELY basic drawing, the story is a bit hard to understand and it is better than alot of other garbage that is submitted to Newgrounds, you did give it a go and it has got past judgement so good going! anyway tighten up the graphics make the film smoother and you'll have a flash epic up and running in no time! take a tip from me - dont use those basic radial colour mix things on your title, you know the one that is red and black, it makes the whole thing look a bit Tacky, try to invent your own unique one. Keep up the good work! ;D
Regards
-flashTEK